Score: 6

"hmm"

submission: Pandemonium Introduction

date: June 15, 2008

The voice acting was pretty horrible, didn't sound serious.

The actual animation had some problems, such as a non-understandable plot, choppy scenes and such.

The music didn't fit in very well either. You want the music to flow with the animation, or even make the music create the animation.

This might sound a little rough, but don't take it as an offensive comment. I think you still did a great job incoprorating 3D objects into the movie.

Score: 7

"Hmm"

submission: Underground: Pimped

date: June 3, 2008

You could improve your animations with more creative angles. The actual car race was a downfall for me, as it was the same view the whole time mainly and the sounds were repeated. Looks as if the cars weren't moving at all for a while.

It was okay though. Your trying. =]

Score: 7

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submission: NewGrounds Resque'

date: May 3, 2008

Very interesting animation, the music stood out a lot. It was wonderful how you compiled them together.

It didn't make too much sense though, and a lot of the facial remarks looked strange to me. The details were low also, but anyway, good job.

Score: 10

"Nice job man"

submission: IndianaStick

date: April 20, 2008

You have really created an interesting piece.
Your animation skills are increasing within everything you make.
Quite smooth overall, nice ideas, great colors for depth, awesome song, nice blood, camera movements, physics, rope movements, basic plot, particles, shading, lighting, movements, text effects, and overall a very nice appeal. Also, the main text based from Indiana Jones looks very similar.

Nice job. My favorite stick FIGHT animator.

Score: 7

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submission: The Art Of Animation II

date: April 7, 2008

The very beginning was quite boring and had a lack of movement. It was choppy and you could have done great with it, if you would have draw more frames.

The animations were good. I liked most of it. Good job.

Score: 4

"Meh.."

submission: A Stick War-Preview

date: March 25, 2008

In terms of animation, it was poorly completed. Don't use such a long amount of text for users to read, that makes the animation boring.
Just another 1st animation. Good job though.

Score: 7

"Nice"

submission: The Patriot

date: March 24, 2008

Really good for a 2nd animation, I could tell what you were doing most of the time.
Although, it was quite choppy and some scenes could have been added and removed..
Either way, you did a good job, keep up the good work.

Score: 10

"Woww"

submission: GhostFight-BOS-Part1

date: March 23, 2008

One of the greatest stick FIGHTS ever made. The effects were awesome, I was amazed by the coding and camera effects you laid out. It's awesome how I could actually change camera views and its cleaver how you made the background change color or the V-Cam flip when you reload the page.
Great job, I hope to see more work from you.

Score: 1

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submission: Slyguy EP.3: Shadow Mario

date: March 18, 2008

I personally didn't understand any of your ideas.
They were awfully animated and made no sense whatsoever.
Please try to add more detail to objects and drawings.
The animation should also be improved, it was very poorly completed.
Rough movements and non natural.
I suggest making a lot of tests before you attempt a longer animation.
Also, try to add more scenes or angles in your animations. That will increase the quality by far.
;]

Score: 10

"Hello Sir"

submission: Evening light

date: March 15, 2008

I can't believe I forgot to comment this.
This was pretty good.
The animation really seemed to flow as it went on.
Like the music and the overall idea.
Good job.

(although could have been darker, but that's just me)