Score: 7

"Hmm"

submission: Underground: Pimped

date: June 3, 2008

You could improve your animations with more creative angles. The actual car race was a downfall for me, as it was the same view the whole time mainly and the sounds were repeated. Looks as if the cars weren't moving at all for a while.

It was okay though. Your trying. =]

Score: 10

"Nice job man"

submission: IndianaStick

date: April 20, 2008

You have really created an interesting piece.
Your animation skills are increasing within everything you make.
Quite smooth overall, nice ideas, great colors for depth, awesome song, nice blood, camera movements, physics, rope movements, basic plot, particles, shading, lighting, movements, text effects, and overall a very nice appeal. Also, the main text based from Indiana Jones looks very similar.

Nice job. My favorite stick FIGHT animator.

Score: 4

"Meh.."

submission: A Stick War-Preview

date: March 25, 2008

In terms of animation, it was poorly completed. Don't use such a long amount of text for users to read, that makes the animation boring.
Just another 1st animation. Good job though.

Score: 1

"...."

submission: Slyguy EP.3: Shadow Mario

date: March 18, 2008

I personally didn't understand any of your ideas.
They were awfully animated and made no sense whatsoever.
Please try to add more detail to objects and drawings.
The animation should also be improved, it was very poorly completed.
Rough movements and non natural.
I suggest making a lot of tests before you attempt a longer animation.
Also, try to add more scenes or angles in your animations. That will increase the quality by far.
;]

Score: 6

"..."

submission: Godfather Short

date: March 9, 2008

Perhaps you could try using the line tool instead of the brush.
Brush derails the quality of anything imo. (desides drawing, making landscapes, mostly for animation its awful, for sticks)
The drawing and perspective of some views were kinda bad.
I liked it though, at least its not another pointless stick fight.

Score: 7

"Nice"

submission: <3 AVA

date: March 7, 2008

It was pretty good.
The music ruined it for me though.
Nice job anyway, I liked it.. (But try not to use the transforming tool for movements, makes it look somewhat bad)

Score: 5

":/?"

submission: The NG Rules

date: March 5, 2008

Why make a flash video showing the rules fly by quickly?
There's a set of rules that are easily found here.
You could have at least put a stop and play button for crying out loud, do you expect anyone to read that fast...
It's somewhat a good idea or RESTATING the rules into 1 file. But still, why recreate them.

Score: 5

"No way"

submission: Short Stickman Revenge

date: March 1, 2008

I highly doubt this was your first movie.
You obviously know how to draw, move the V-Cam, set it up right, use a preloader, and animate somewhat. But it was rather boring and plain. It's ok, make a more lengthy animation.

Score: 4

"Meh"

submission: CaPaNdA jAkC

date: February 24, 2008

I didn't like it too much at all.
No plot, the music was annoying.
The animation wasn't all that great, neither the graphics.
Nice try.

Score: 5

"uhhhh"

submission: TISFAT A4 - "2008 Collab"

date: February 1, 2008

Was nothing tweened in this? Come on, tweening is so easy. This looked like the whole thing was tweened.

Everything basically moved slow, and a lot of the time they slide while getting up.
The blood was pretty poor also, just a blob of red and blur it. That's what I think you did. There were no particles or any smaller sized blood. Just one size and it disappeared.

I personally didn't like it.

But it was pretty good I guess. I just hate tweens.